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Friday, October 30, 2009

Friday 55

Welcome to Friday 55. The object of the exercise is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you participate, be sure to drop a comment at G-Man’s blog so others will know how to find your story.


Clouds roll in, a storm on the hunt. It will not rest until it can release its pent up energy. Shadows spread, chewing up streets, marking its territory as the power builds. Darkness rules, the sun turns away, unable to bear witness. With a mighty roar, it unleashes it’s fury, cleansing the world once more.


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11 Comments:

At 4:44 AM, Blogger Brian Miller said...

great 55...love the hinting imagery...off for the cleansing! spooky!

mine is up!

 
At 4:57 AM, Blogger James Goodman said...

Thanks, Brian. I'm off to check out yours...

 
At 5:06 AM, Blogger Chef Kar said...

Definitely painted a nice picture with so few words. Again, great job James. Loving photos today too.

Have an eerie weekend!

You'll find 55 ~ Skipping Stones posted.

 
At 5:15 AM, Blogger James Goodman said...

Thank you so much, Chef. You have an eerie weekend as well!

 
At 5:29 AM, Blogger Dr.John said...

Powerful 55. So the storm has a use.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it

HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.

 
At 6:02 AM, Blogger Jessie said...

nicely done. the first image that came to mind were lioness’ on the prowl

 
At 8:18 AM, Anonymous Alice Audrey said...

Great 55.

 
At 8:45 AM, Blogger Akelamalu said...

Oh WOW, your words paint a fantastic picture James! :0

My 55 is up too.

 
At 9:06 AM, Blogger snowelf said...

James, I love your 55's cause I always want to know more!! :) Very nice choice of visuals as well.

Have a great Halloween weekend!!

--snow

 
At 11:34 AM, Blogger lime said...

i love to watch a good storm!

 
At 7:12 PM, Blogger G-Man said...

Well...You sure live in the right state for powerful storms!
Excellent Nature 55 James.
Thanks for this vivid little masterpiece, and please have a safe and Fun-Filled Week-End...G

 

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