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Friday, June 06, 2008

Friday 55

Welcome to Friday 55. The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you participate, be sure to drop a comment at G-Man’s blog so others will know how to find your story.

Her eyes are closed, but fluttering with the pleasure she feels from the warmth. Her lips are suddenly dry, she wets them with her tongue. A fine sheet of sweat coats her body. Her skin tingles from exposure. It’s time. She rolls to her stomach. “Honey, will you put some suntan lotion on my back?”

I now have the Friday position over at Oh, Get a Grip!.

Oh and have you read the amazing review of The Writing on the Wall by none other than our very own Mona?

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17 Comments:

At 5:53 AM, Blogger lime said...

oh, cabana boy.......

good one, james.

and by golly, i think that's a yahtzee

 
At 6:00 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

lol, yahtzee it is. :D thanks, Lime. :D

 
At 6:21 AM, Blogger Kelly Kirch said...

I totally got that one! Could be because J came home flourescent red yesterday despite the sunscreen she used. Sigh.

Heading over to Grip to see you there too.

 
At 6:26 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

lol, poor thing. I hope it turns to tan and doesn't peel. :D

 
At 6:36 AM, Blogger Mona said...

Oh... what a dream to have lotions applied by a pair of loving hands on ya!

That is beautifully expressed James Goodman. I have not done my 55 as yet..my secret blog has taken up most of my strength today. Hope I shall be able to write one later! :)

 
At 7:53 AM, Blogger Breazy said...

I really like this 55 James! Nothing better than a man with good hands rubbing sun tan lotion on your back while you are doing my favorite thing, soaking up some rays.

Hope you have a wonderful weekend!

 
At 8:30 AM, Blogger Akelamalu said...

LOL I wasn't expecting that last line at all - I love it James!

 
At 12:18 PM, Blogger Phain said...

great twist! i was wondering for a moment if the story was going to become nsfw!

have a great weekend :)

 
At 2:15 PM, Blogger ciara said...

ha ha ha ha ha me likey! very good 55, here i'm thinking she's going to say 'wow, that was great' LOL

 
At 2:44 PM, Blogger SignGurl said...

You are a talented man!! Great 55!

 
At 7:02 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

Thanks, Mona. It's good to be the owner of the loving hands as well. :D Secret blog????

lol, it sounds like a great way to spend the day, huh Breazy? "D

Thanks, AK :D

lol, Phain. I do enjoy the twists. :D

lmao, Ciara I'm sure that come later. :D

Thank you kindly, signgurl. :D

 
At 11:04 PM, Blogger Mona said...

I did a 55 finally...

O that secret blog is nothing much... It is where I practice some writing... writing some snippets from my life & some dreams & working upon improvising the content...That's all.

I am working upon writing an autobiographical novel, which is one task I feel EVERY human can do. As they say... each one of us is capable of writing at least ONE good book that will be as unique as each life is! :)

 
At 7:04 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

Cool, I'll go check it the 55.

oh, that sounds cool, Mona. I couldn't agree more, every can do at least one.

I hope you had a wonderful weekend. :D

 
At 7:44 AM, Blogger Serena Joy said...

I've seen you comment on so many other blogs that I thought it was high time I paid you a visit. And I'm glad I did; nice blog! Love what you did with your 55.:)

 
At 7:47 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

lol, thank you Serena. Come back anytime, I'll leave the light on for you :D.

 
At 8:19 PM, Blogger Donnetta Lee said...

Oh, that was a good one, James! You had me going there right up to the last line!
Donnetta

 
At 5:51 AM, Blogger James Goodman, Author said...

thank you, Donnetta. :D

 

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