Rants, Raves, & Random Thoughts

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Friday, October 20, 2006

Friday 55

Sand burns my eyes, but I don’t dare blink. They’re close, sounds like three of them. My rifle’s gone, a bullet smashed through it’s chamber in the ambush that claimed the rest of my squad. They’re searching. I slip a blade quietly into each hand. I spring out of my hole. No one lives forever.

9 Comments:

At 6:27 AM, Blogger lime said...

wow! i'm there! well done.

 
At 8:35 AM, Blogger Carrie said...

That was great! But almost brought tears to my eyes.

 
At 11:53 AM, Blogger Sandra Ruttan said...

Nicely done!

 
At 12:19 PM, Blogger James Goodman said...

Thank you, ladies. :D

 
At 5:27 AM, Blogger Bernita said...

Good, James.

 
At 6:35 AM, Anonymous linda said...

Good Job Son.
awesome as always
love ya
MoM

 
At 11:33 PM, Blogger Southern Writer said...

Ooooh. Chills.

 
At 9:59 AM, Blogger M.E Ellis said...

Oooooh, scathing last line!

:o)

 
At 5:29 AM, Blogger James Goodman said...

I appreciate that. I'm glad you ladies liked it. :D

 

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