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Friday, September 08, 2006

Friday 55

Eyes narrow with murderous intent. His prey evasive, but his grip grows tighter. It must be done, it’s what he does. Knuckles grow white from the strain. He will not give in. Movement, a subtle dance beneath his fingers. A twist, a turn, it pulls free with a pop. The pickle jar is finally open.

12 Comments:

At 5:19 AM, Blogger lime said...

LMAO!!!! You had me! hilarious and so true!

 
At 5:41 AM, Blogger Bernita said...

Hee, hee, James.
Delightful.

 
At 6:09 AM, Blogger EA Monroe said...

Darn pickle jars!

 
At 6:19 AM, Blogger Leslie said...

Jelly jars are my enemy. Surprisingly, I've had no cravings for pickles yet. Ha! Ha!

 
At 7:31 AM, Blogger barefoot_mistress said...

Oh man, you really scared me! I thought you were squashing a cute little fuzzy critter or something!

LOL thanks for playing, James!

 
At 8:54 AM, Blogger Carrie said...

LMAO! I love to write stuff like that. My friends used to love it when I did that. I would write some hot sexy scene and then the character would just get up and walk out.

 
At 11:00 AM, Blogger James Goodman said...

Thank you, Ladies. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Susie, I just realized that I've been horribly remiss. I've not once linked back to you or given you credit for starting the Friday 55. I'll remedy that next week and all subsequent weeks. :D

 
At 2:35 PM, Blogger Logophile said...

HA HA!
I love it,
absolutely perfect.
Although, I have to say, I don't know many people who get murderous about their pickles.

 
At 2:52 PM, Blogger Breazy said...

LMAO! I love it ! Have a good weekend !

 
At 6:20 AM, Blogger James Goodman said...

Logo, we're murderous about everything at my house. :D

Thanks, Breazy, you too.

 
At 11:51 AM, Blogger M.E Ellis said...

GRRR!

I was expecting some neck snapping there!

Hmph...

:o)

 
At 2:42 PM, Blogger James Goodman said...

lol, I was being tricky this week. :D

 

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